Writing Tips~

A Handy Checklist to Help You Edit Your Writing

By: Courtney Carpenter | December 7, 2012

fiction writing | getting published

This excerpt from The Writer’s Little Helper by James V. Smith Jr., explores the common mistakes that writers make–and how to avoid them. Refer to this checklist when you’re ready to submit your manuscript to an agent or editor.

Amateur and Common Mistakes

Before you send your manuscript or writing sample to an agent or editor, check for these items.

❏ Avoid multiple exclamation points!!!!! Avoid even single exclamation points! Except for the case of a true exclamation, like the rare Rats! Or the too-rare Cubs win!
❏ DON’T WRITE TEXT IN ALL CAPS. It’s too hard to read, and it’s shouting in print. AND WHY SHOUT?
❏ Avoid per, as in per instructions. Other than uses like words per sentence, let cats per.
❏ Use the search function to find -ly words, adverbs. Check each adverb ending in -ly to see if it can be cut. Use stronger verbs and you won’t need the help of adverbs.
❏ Search for -ize and -ization and cut those when you can.
❏ Search for -tion words, too, and cut them down to size.
❏ Affect is a verb meaning to influence. Effect is sometimes a verb meaning to produce, but it’s most often a noun, meaning the result produced.
❏ Impact is a noun not a verb.
Wrong: The ten-pound report impacted him a lot.
Right: The impact of the ten-pound report broke his ribs, his spirit, and his momentum up the career ladder.

Excerpt From my self published book, “Heart Paths”

Again, as previously stated about this book, it is self-published. You will find spelling errors and grammatical errors. I wrote this book in a manner of days. It is a collection of poems that I had shared with friends and family. I hope to publish more in the future, free of errors. Thank you to all those who support me! MwsR

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I am just not all that, but it’s okay

Words never or rarely match what people say.

They will twist them with their own spin

Never looking to where the words should end.

It’s hard being me.

See, I have demons you cannot see.

The problem then, lies within me

Wish sometimes, I could start again

Sadly though, that’s not for me

A prisoner of myself, for life, is what I will be.

MwsR

Heart Pathshttps://www.amazon.com/Heart-Paths-Mws-R/dp/1387371924

This poem was a poem coming from a rejected past. Despite what we may want others to think of us, sometimes we cannot influence the way we want. People will say what they are going to say, despite our best efforts. We need to be okay with the fact that we are something else than what words have portrayed. When you reach that moment in your life, then you will be able to be free of past judgements, past lies, and things you did wrong in your past. I wish you all, that. MwsR

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Keto Common Mistakes

There are a number of common mistakes that are easy to make when transitioning to a lower carbohydrate way of life.

1. Fatphobia

Our calorie counting and low-fat ways of the past still tend to trip a lot of people up. With low-carb you are now free to eat butter, avocado, olive oil, and full-fat foods, but may still be afraid of these foods. To assist your transition, focus on food in its natural wholefood state, as after all, nature knows best. A mantra to consider: “fat doesn’t make you fat, fat helps you burn fat”.

Additionally, you cannot cut carbohydrates and fat at the same time. Low-carb should provide you with exceptional satiety, but only if you are eating an adequate volume of healthy fats. A simple barometer to use is that if you’re hungry within four hours of eating, add an additional teaspoon to a tablespoon of healthy fat and watch your satiety extend.

2. Excess protein

It is important to acknowledge that a lower carbohydrate diet is also one that is higher in healthy fats and moderate in protein. It is absolutely not the Atkins Diet which gained popularity in the late ’80s and often included big slabs of meat and butter at every meal.

There are many reasons why moderate protein is important, including the fact that excess protein is converted to glucose via gluconeogenesis, which interferes with blood sugar control and can promote high insulin. As we discussed, high insulin shuts off fat burning and can re-start the blood sugar rollercoaster you have worked so hard to stabilize with low-carb.

For most individuals, an intake of 20 percent protein is more than enough. In terms of grams/day, a female consuming 1700 calories/ day, would need only 85g of protein/day and a male eating 3000 calories/day would need less than 150g of protein/day.

3. Inefficient nutrient timing

Nutrient timing is the consumption of real food based carbohydrates in the post-training window. This is particularly important after high-intensity exercise, as muscle glycogen has been depleted. The addition of a banana to your post-workout smoothie or half to one cup of sweet potato to your dinner after a big session at the gym is an important recovery decision. By replenishing muscle glycogen, you will recover faster, perform better in subsequent sessions and continue to improve in training.

Without this addition many people feel lethargic, experience increased delayed onset muscle soreness and/or lose their top end speed or strength. With a well-designed low-carbohydrate template, you can burn fat, extend your longevity and still get faster and stronger with each workout!

4. Low salt intake

The fear that all salt with giving you high blood pressure is another dogma based myth of the last five decades. As you initially lower your carbohydrate intake, your salt requirements can increase dramatically, so it is important to add high-quality salt (such as sea salt or pink salt) to maintain an optimum blood volume.

If you have experienced poor performance or fatigue on low-carb in the past, please test a higher salt intake and your physiological response to this. A simple way to increase your salt intake is to sprinkle salt on your main meals or add a pinch to one or two water bottles you consume each day.

5. High stress

In situations of stress, our adrenal glands produce the hormone cortisol. This is part of our “flight or fight” response and is necessary for human optimal function and survival.

The role of cortisol is to stimulate the liver to release glucose into the blood. Where stress is chronic and cortisol levels are consistently elevated, this excess glucose inhibits fat utilization. So, you could have the most well-designed low-carbohydrate template, but without stress management, your body will be in a fat storage mode, not a fat burning one. Just another reason to add meditation to your daily schedule, don’t you think?